I've been slacking off on the blogs, but here's a quick update.
I decided to take part of an expansion that I had had in mind for Of Power & Glory and put it into the main game with a small tweak. The idea was to soften the blow a bit when you have gone into the court of a king and then that king no longer goes to war. In that case you now have an opportunity to take a card for that king that gives you a condition. If that condition is met for that king at the end of the game, the card is worth 1 victory point. I think this provides a catch up mechanism that the reviewers felt was missing.
I have submitted the game to a publisher for review.... I tell more if/when there's more to tell!!!